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r7 ([personal profile] r7) wrote in [community profile] saladlove 2014-10-16 05:33 am (UTC)

Alright. I hope these will help you improve your writing in the future, as well as in this specific chapter.

However, I still must point out the relevance..... It doesn't even need to be or become relevant, just an explanation why it is/will be or how it will become so would work.

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