Someone wrote in [community profile] saladlove 2016-08-29 01:42 am (UTC)

This is definitely interesting. I don't have any particular favorite characters or people I'd like to see more of, but I will suggest adding in some more physical outward emotion details. Or more physical details in general. It's kind of hard to connect with the charactes when you have no clue what they look like, especially when it's a video series. Also, some expansion on their general personalities, and more about what they enjoy would be nice.
TLDR: character development.
-Observing Anon

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