Alright. I hope these will help you improve your writing in the future, as well as in this specific chapter.
However, I still must point out the relevance..... It doesn't even need to be or become relevant, just an explanation why it is/will be or how it will become so would work.
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Date: 2014-10-16 05:33 am (UTC)However, I still must point out the relevance..... It doesn't even need to be or become relevant, just an explanation why it is/will be or how it will become so would work.