Now, I'm not entirely sure on this, but I'm pretty sure it would be good to have a hyphen here.
'a pair of two one way mirrors' a pair of one-way mirrors
Also, you've already mentioned it's a pair, so adding the word two is unnecessary and confusing. I'm not too familiar with my hyphen rules, so you might want to ask Tana, but definitely avoid 'a pair of two'.
Other then that, I'm intrigued. My brain is trying to place the setting in four or so vastly different possible situations at the same time, and the result is some strange mixture of clue, the Manhattan project, The Giver, and the grimm reaper. Great job and keep up the good work. (::) (::) (::) -Observing Anon
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Date: 2017-04-02 09:22 am (UTC)'a pair of two one way mirrors'
a pair of one-way mirrors
Also, you've already mentioned it's a pair, so adding the word two is unnecessary and confusing. I'm not too familiar with my hyphen rules, so you might want to ask Tana, but definitely avoid 'a pair of two'.
Other then that, I'm intrigued. My brain is trying to place the setting in four or so vastly different possible situations at the same time, and the result is some strange mixture of clue, the Manhattan project, The Giver, and the grimm reaper. Great job and keep up the good work. (::) (::) (::)
-Observing Anon